قطعة صغيرة في اللغة الإنجليزية ، أتمنى تقولوا ليا فين الأخطاء

السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته ..

هذي قطعة بسيطة في اللغة الإنجليزية

ياليت أي أحد لقى أخطاء يقولي عنها وبالتفصيل



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Insomnia has a number of negative effects that might be affect on the health and daily life. To start with, people who have Insomnia they are suffering from inability to concentrate, such as, what I am doing right now I can't focus on my homework because I need to sleep enough. Moreover, lack of sleep may leads to social problems. Because people who have the lack of sleep they are irritable and nervous. Last but not least, Insomnia affects badly on people who can't sleep enough. Because it makes the body exhausted, tired and exposed to many diseases, such as, influenza and headache.

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القطعه ممتازه وتعبيرها رائع ,

اتوقع انها عن الارهاق ؟ .. !


Insomnia has a number of negative effects that might affect

بدون be والباقي سليم


شكرا للي حاول يساعدني

لكن هذا أفضل ما توصل إليه خبراء اللغة الإنجليزية في أحد المواقع الثانية حراير بلادي

Insomnia has a number of negative effects that might have an effect on health and daily life. For instance, people with Insomnia suffer from the inability to concentrate such as, not being able to focus on homework due to lack of sleep. Moreover, lack of sleep may leads to social problems because people who have the lack of sleep they are irritable and nervous. Finally, Insomnia affects badly on people who can't sleep enough because it makes the body exhausted, tired and exposed to many diseases such as, influenza and headache.

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